Today we learnt to identify a quality blog comment

Which super hero would you pick?

This is the Superhero that I have chosen and maybe you could choose a superhero that you love and post it to your blog.

My buzzy bee rap

                 My Bee Rap.

I wonder what it would be like to be a bee?

Buzz goes the bee,

Hour after hour,

Buzz goes the bee,

From flower to flower,

Buzz goes the bee,

Making honey so sweet,

Bees make the honey that I love to eat.

The Seven Stars of Matariki.

Matariki Stars

by Isitolo and Steven

Seven handsome brothers were once so cool,

Going out hunting for some food,

They met seven evil ladies who treated them like fools,

Each brother so handsome and bold,

Took their ladies under their fold,

Sharing their love with each evil witch,

Little did they know they were being bewitched,

The brothers were changed to skin and bone,

They were once strong and very toned,

Mitai knew something was wrong,

So off to the ladies he did roam,

Up on the branches he did see,

There six fantails were waiting patiently

The last fantail flew near by,

Watched carefully by clever Mitai

There he transformed into a Kereru,

To find out what the witches were up too.

He followed the fantails to Ngongotaha,

And watched and listened to their ka-ka.

Off he ran to warn  his brothers,

To tell them all about the drama’s,

Their koro gave them a special net,

To capture the ladies just like some pests,

Mitai transformed into an albatross,

And carried them away just like a boss!

Into the heavens he decided to toss,

The evil women who caused the fuss!

And there they sit during the night

The Eyes of God, seven eyes so bright!

The Seven Stars of

Matariki.

The big bad wolf is the real victim.

Tuesday 6th September

Don’t Judge Them By Their Cover

by Steven Misa

I agree that the big bad wolf is the victim

Everyone around me are always saying “the big bad wolf should leave the three little pigs alone, I hate that big bad wolf!”. Every word is always a bad comment. But I strongly believe the big bad wolf is the real victim and I have strong reasons to back up my point of view.

It is a well known fact that in the story the big bad wolf is chasing the 3 little pigs and thinking the bad wolf is going to eat them. However how do they know the bad wolf would want to eat them maybe he wants to be their friend?

The poor wolf is a meat eater of course people would judge him. This wolf is a lone wolf and every lonely wolf or person needs company.

Surely you already know all animals like to stick together with their own kind or pack. Maybe the big bad wolf is sick of seeing his own kind maybe he wants to meet new species. Although pigs are carnivores prey that doesn’t mean a wolf can’t be a friend.

In the book the wolf says “little pig little pigs let me in. Not by the hair of my chiny chin chin” replied the three little pigs.Then that’s why the good wolf, well in my eyes. Went huff and puff and a I’ll  blow your house down. However that blow could’ve been a sneeze and when you are outside in a nasty storm you are most likely to get sick.

I don’t want to brag but these are the most laziest pigs I’ve ever known. One pig wants to build a house full of straw and the other with sticks. These 3 pigs are the most filthy liars. They set up the wolf and ended up toasting him for lunch. Well not exactly but in my opinion. The pigs heard the wolf coming down the chimney and quickly goes one pig to light the fire or probably the oven, the cheek of them!

They haven’t even met the poor wolf and they want to kill him.

Anyways after reading my 3 points I hope you now understand that the big bad

Wolf (inferencing quietly)is a victim. So this is why you should agree with me so we can open other people’s  eyes. Remember to not judge anyone by their clothing.